Head Teacher Awards 23.09.16

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This week’s Head Teacher Awards go to Faith and Tom for their amazing writing!  They have been writing a setting description for a Stone Age story and have been focusing on how to paint a picture for the reader.  We hope you like the atmosphere they have both managed to create!  We certainly would like to visit these lovely places!

Faith has thought carefully about using expanded noun phrases and has included some excellent personification too.  Well done, Faith.

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Tom has carefully chosen the words he has used in his description to add specific details and his use of prepositions helps us to form a really clear picture in our minds.  Excellent work, Tom.

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Well done, Team Osprey!! Let’s keep up the excellent writing going on in our classroom!

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